英语高手帮我看一下这句话有没有语法错误,As individuals pay closer attention to travel abroad,an argument about the safety is appearing increasingly.学艺不精,麻烦高手帮我看下这句话语法有没有错误,写作的时候

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英语高手帮我看一下这句话有没有语法错误,As individuals pay closer attention to travel abroad,an argument about the safety is appearing increasingly.学艺不精,麻烦高手帮我看下这句话语法有没有错误,写作的时候
英语高手帮我看一下这句话有没有语法错误,
As individuals pay closer attention to travel abroad,an argument about the safety is appearing increasingly.
学艺不精,麻烦高手帮我看下这句话语法有没有错误,写作的时候这里面有没有哪些词可以用更好的话来替换,除了travel abroad 和safety

英语高手帮我看一下这句话有没有语法错误,As individuals pay closer attention to travel abroad,an argument about the safety is appearing increasingly.学艺不精,麻烦高手帮我看下这句话语法有没有错误,写作的时候
语法倒没什么问题,但是表达方式和用词不够西式.我对句子的理解是越来越多人关注海外旅游,发生安全的纠纷也多了起来.不知理解对否?
As people are getting more interested to travel abroad,there is an increasing number of safety
disputes.
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两个独立的主语，貌似没有什么语法错误，

As travelling abroad attracts more attention, there is growing concern about safety.
This would be more native.

As individuals are paying closer/more attention to travelling abroad,the arguments about the safety are arousing increasingly.
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